This is lovely the way you've connected these three verses...I especially like the imagery of the last one. That line "the past in a bud" could be read different ways...I think of a life "nipped in the bud" too soon, the (past) love expressed through a gift of flowers, the rose in her hair, all sorts of stuff. Nice.
This is lovely the way you've connected these three verses...I especially like the imagery of the last one. That line "the past in a bud" could be read different ways...I think of a life "nipped in the bud" too soon, the (past) love expressed through a gift of flowers, the rose in her hair, all sorts of stuff. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite piece so far. Believe it or not, I like the cheesy love stories more than the dark stuff.
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